Waiting for the leaves of color to dance quietly and the crisp air to kiss my skin Knowing through the viewfinder I will see My Girls framed by God's Beauty- Family Fall Road Trip
This is wonderful! Thank you for your sweet compliment on my last post. I appreciate it so much, but I think you give yourself far too little credit! You're a beautiful writer. :)
Nice one, Cindy. May I say that I would like the poem to finish after "see"? There were so many opportunities then ...
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Ralf
That was a good one, Cindy :)
ReplyDeleteespecially like the word-play in the last line,
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devika
Lovely walk into Autumn, beautiful Cindyb
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! Thank you for your sweet compliment on my last post. I appreciate it so much, but I think you give yourself far too little credit! You're a beautiful writer. :)
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is good because there is always heartfelt emotion there. You have wonderful things to look forward to in autumn.
ReplyDeleteThe last line, -family fall road trip- becomes, then, the whole. Fine thought, Cindy.
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I think - it's very romantic
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