you will feel
the firestorm
that once
RAGED
through your blood,
making you
breathless
as the sound of your heart
beat like a
d r u m
you will feel the matchstrike
as the touch of your skin
unites
causing the electric
current to
travel
and
travel
making your toes curl
in complete
satisfaction
you will feel this
story
again and again
Am I looking forward to it? Has this already happend? Poetry slam - that's what we call this inside-out-lyric here in Germany. Same in your area, Cindy?
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf
tell it again...tell it again...smiles. i like this story...
ReplyDeleteYou got an electric shock, or what!??
ReplyDeleteha! kidding Cindy :)
wishes,
devika
I must have been saying..."hope you are not talking about getting an electric shock" -- still it's just kidding -
ReplyDeleteHope you don't mind that, Cindy :)
wishes,
devika
I dont mind Dev..It is all in good fun. I am so glad to see you can comment again. I miss you when you are not around :)
ReplyDeleteCindy, this is such an interesting poem...starts off with all that heat and anger...and slides into something entirely different. So much power here...like a form of release.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cindy :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
...and this is the story which has no ending!
ReplyDeletePEACE!
Steve E
Cindy, pardon this intrusion:
ReplyDeleteI wished so much to comment on Devika's "abstract". If she reads this, maybe she will allow me a brief three sentences.
(Her comments are closed, of course.)
Steve anytime you need to comment to Devika, feel free to do so here.. She writes beautifully and she is just a wonderful person!!!
ReplyDeleteSteve, with Cindy's permission - ofcourse you can tell me here, i am sorry i had to close the comments...
ReplyDeleteCindy, i feel so obliged, thank you so much, my dear friend,
wishes,
devika
Wow would I love to feel that again...
ReplyDeletei love the curling toes..
ReplyDeleteMmmmm yes...the way he touched me...the way I felt.
ReplyDeleteYes... I remember. _m
ReplyDeleteToes curling...that's a sure sign!
ReplyDeleteThis is powerful,
ReplyDeletedivine flow.
thanks for linking up with poetry potluck.
Dear Cindy Brown
ReplyDeleteYes , feel this story again and again.. I enjoyed reading it. thanks
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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i feel i feel! what a great write!
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