Wednesday, May 18, 2011

fire in the wind
uncontrollable heat-
doused by tears

9 comments:

  1. emotive...fires up your way? or are you being metaphorical?

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  2. should i read is as the new one's response to heat? if and if not, hope it subsides and your days better, Cindy....it's been very hot here too,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. but i must say, nice to see a poetry post from you after a long long while :)

    devika

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  4. Totally metaphorical Brian:)This actually has nothing to do with temperature...Not weather temperature anyway :) Thank you Devika, I have been on a long dry spell...

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  5. oh okay...hope to see you posting more often, Cindy :)

    love,
    devika

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  6. Sounds like a rough day then. Wish you well Cindy

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  7. If I didn't know better, I'd say it's menopause. :)

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  8. Gosh, but there are terrible fires raging. I hope it's not something you are dealing with...

    I bet your beautiful granddaughter is thriving, Cindy!

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  9. I feel a lot of passion in this one...I like that!

    (But then, I've always the impression that you were pretty hot!)

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