I like the last line...
This was deep, Cindyi liked it much wishes, devika
Oh this is beautiful, cherished of memories, fantastic CindyB!
I too really like the ending line...and the places this took me.
A lovely poem Cindy. I too particularly liked the last line...
Thanks to all!! I so enjoy your comments!!
Time that never was - you gave it a place.Best wishesRalf
Thank you for your comments, they mean so much to me!!