Nice one, Cindy. May I say that I would like the poem to finish after "see"? There were so many opportunities then ...Best wishesRalf
That was a good one, Cindy :)especially like the word-play in the last line,wishes, devika
Lovely walk into Autumn, beautiful Cindyb
This is wonderful! Thank you for your sweet compliment on my last post. I appreciate it so much, but I think you give yourself far too little credit! You're a beautiful writer. :)
Your poetry is good because there is always heartfelt emotion there. You have wonderful things to look forward to in autumn.
The last line, -family fall road trip- becomes, then, the whole. Fine thought, Cindy._m
I think - it's very romantic
Thank you for your comments, they mean so much to me!!