Monday, September 28, 2009

Autumn

Waiting
for the
leaves of color
to dance quietly
and the crisp air
to kiss my skin
Knowing
through the viewfinder
I will see
My Girls
framed by
God's Beauty-
Family Fall Road Trip

7 comments:

  1. Nice one, Cindy. May I say that I would like the poem to finish after "see"? There were so many opportunities then ...

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. That was a good one, Cindy :)
    especially like the word-play in the last line,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Lovely walk into Autumn, beautiful Cindyb

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  4. This is wonderful! Thank you for your sweet compliment on my last post. I appreciate it so much, but I think you give yourself far too little credit! You're a beautiful writer. :)

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  5. Your poetry is good because there is always heartfelt emotion there. You have wonderful things to look forward to in autumn.

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  6. The last line, -family fall road trip- becomes, then, the whole. Fine thought, Cindy.
    _m

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  7. I think - it's very romantic

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