oh I love this Cindy, nothing like a hot caramel java, I am drooling ;) lol
Well, i haven't had that...but sounds good :))a fine deviation in haiku, Cindy :)love, devika
Oh well, i am not an authority to say if its a deviation or not..i just thought so....a different aspect to this :)devika
I do not know what it is. Ha! That is why you will not see me label anything, unless someone comments on what it was. I woke up at 3 this morning wishing had a caramel coffee. I just say it, I am not a good rule follower:)
i know that, Cindy :)devika
Devika , It is obvious I don't follow rules huh?lol. Now how much fun would it be if I followed all the rules? I am kidding with you Dev :)Love, Cindy
Rules? This is a good example for pure expression - and surprise: Line three shows a solution which has got nothing to do with any form of - let's say - human cooperation. (Well, it could be shorter: sweetness touches meits burning inside-caramel javaBut I like the original, too.)Best wishesRalf
Hi Ralf nice to see you again! I like your version too!!
You can always say whatever you feel like with me Cindy, thats our unsaid rule, i guess :)Now....Cindy, I guess I am one who don't mind following the rules, if only I knew it :)wishes, devika
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