Thursday, July 23, 2009

sweetness touches my tongue
feel the burn inside of me-
caramel java

9 comments:

  1. oh I love this Cindy, nothing like a hot caramel java, I am drooling ;) lol

    ReplyDelete
  2. Well, i haven't had that...but sounds good :))

    a fine deviation in haiku, Cindy :)

    love,
    devika

    ReplyDelete
  3. Oh well, i am not an authority to say if its a deviation or not..i just thought so....a different aspect to this :)

    devika

    ReplyDelete
  4. I do not know what it is. Ha! That is why you will not see me label anything, unless someone comments on what it was. I woke up at 3 this morning wishing had a caramel coffee. I just say it, I am not a good rule follower:)

    ReplyDelete
  5. i know that, Cindy :)

    devika

    ReplyDelete
  6. Devika , It is obvious I don't follow rules huh?
    lol. Now how much fun would it be if I followed all the rules? I am kidding with you Dev :)
    Love, Cindy

    ReplyDelete
  7. Rules? This is a good example for pure expression - and surprise: Line three shows a solution which has got nothing to do with any form of - let's say - human cooperation.

    (Well, it could be shorter:

    sweetness touches me
    its burning inside-
    caramel java

    But I like the original, too.)

    Best wishes
    Ralf

    ReplyDelete
  8. Hi Ralf nice to see you again! I like your version too!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. You can always say whatever you feel like with me Cindy,
    thats our unsaid rule, i guess :)

    Now....Cindy, I guess I am one who don't mind following the rules, if only I knew it :)

    wishes,
    devika

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your comments, they mean so much to me!!