I do not know what it is. Ha! That is why you will not see me label anything, unless someone comments on what it was. I woke up at 3 this morning wishing had a caramel coffee. I just say it, I am not a good rule follower:)
Devika , It is obvious I don't follow rules huh? lol. Now how much fun would it be if I followed all the rules? I am kidding with you Dev :) Love, Cindy
Rules? This is a good example for pure expression - and surprise: Line three shows a solution which has got nothing to do with any form of - let's say - human cooperation.
(Well, it could be shorter:
sweetness touches me its burning inside- caramel java
oh I love this Cindy, nothing like a hot caramel java, I am drooling ;) lol
ReplyDeleteWell, i haven't had that...but sounds good :))
ReplyDeletea fine deviation in haiku, Cindy :)
love,
devika
Oh well, i am not an authority to say if its a deviation or not..i just thought so....a different aspect to this :)
ReplyDeletedevika
I do not know what it is. Ha! That is why you will not see me label anything, unless someone comments on what it was. I woke up at 3 this morning wishing had a caramel coffee. I just say it, I am not a good rule follower:)
ReplyDeletei know that, Cindy :)
ReplyDeletedevika
Devika , It is obvious I don't follow rules huh?
ReplyDeletelol. Now how much fun would it be if I followed all the rules? I am kidding with you Dev :)
Love, Cindy
Rules? This is a good example for pure expression - and surprise: Line three shows a solution which has got nothing to do with any form of - let's say - human cooperation.
ReplyDelete(Well, it could be shorter:
sweetness touches me
its burning inside-
caramel java
But I like the original, too.)
Best wishes
Ralf
Hi Ralf nice to see you again! I like your version too!!
ReplyDeleteYou can always say whatever you feel like with me Cindy,
ReplyDeletethats our unsaid rule, i guess :)
Now....Cindy, I guess I am one who don't mind following the rules, if only I knew it :)
wishes,
devika