Saturday, September 18, 2010

The Kiss

HE kisses her goodbye
as she leaves for work
she kisses him goodbye
as he leaves for work
going in different directions...

electrical current in the air
sparks flying
smoldering heat
eyes locked
Good Morning
how are you?
HE kisses her...

smoldering heat
sparks flying
electrical current in the air
eyes locked
Hello
how are you?
he kisses her...

10 comments:

  1. I guess I am in some kind of crazy mood, but I have made this into a riddle of sorts and I wanted to see if anyone could figure it out. Have fun!!!

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  2. i think this is a love square...there seems to be at least 4 sides...lol. i just hope they all brushed their teeth, because at this point they have all tasted each other...

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  3. stopped by to see if there was an answer yet...happy sunday!

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  4. Happy Sunday to you Brian. I am waiting on my regulars to drop in and then i will answer. Have a great day!

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  5. All I could think was that is a nice way to have some give and take! :)

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  6. i knew the twist in a second the cheated cheats..

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  7. Well, it sure is a riddle...but for sure it seems like some hanky panky is going on!

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  8. Now that I think about it, I think Lorraine is correct. :)

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  9. It is interesting to see how everyone thinks, I had a lot of fun with this! If I was reading this I would assume,as Lorraine and Brian did, that the cheated on is cheating, or there was some partner swapping going on. Of course my he's and she's make it look that way as well. But there is only 2 people in this twist. He and she are together, they met while working together in a company that does not allow dating. This is a new relationship. So there is a lot of kissing going on. They have to arrive at their job separately, so no one knows they are together. Of course this relationship is forbidden so that sparks more fire. Stolen kisses, Good morning, how are you he responds with a kiss, Hello, HOW ARE YOU and he responds again with a kiss. But you could take this and go anyway you want :) Thanks for your input!

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